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-First of all, the main goal of FairEmail is to help you protect your privacy.
-What follows is a complete listing of all data that *could* be sent to the internet,
-which is eventually always your choice and therefore optional.
+First of all, FairEmail's main goal is to help you protect your privacy.
+What follows is a complete overview of all the data that **can be** sent to the internet,
+which in the end is always your choice and therefore optional.
 
 ## Overview